Through class feedback I established some minor issues in regards to my first front cover. There were some unnoticed issues surrounding spelling mistakes - eg The abstract noun 'perspective' in the left stand first, is spelt as 'perspecitve' which is an error due to font size and genuine clarity. Also, the feature of Maxwell Starkey was seen to be 'plain','boring', and 'simplistic' by some of my peers, so I have decided I want to change the font and it's colour to reflect authenticity through creating a niche product. I will swap the strapline "beauty in the truth" with "Maxwell Starkey" to enable a full feature of the model. The streamline I will decrease the size and place just above the Masthead. Also, the masthead will become yellow to tie in with the golden yellow of the sunflower, and create a more diverse, unique product. Plus to separate the stand first and storylines I will change the colours in between each stand to show difference in content feature.
Content page will feature this image on the left hand side, of the double page of the exclusive edition. This initially was going to be my front cover for the exclusive edition but I then decided to make the image of Sofine and Libby to create the band the 'Golden Pinks'.
With the second edition front cover I felt a bit more wary about my layout. I found it challenging to establish the colour palette that I wanted to match and tie in with the photo. The right hand streamline was deemed 'too informal' and the font wasn't well-received. Plus the font at the bottom will be changed as it was deemed unreadable.
